epistemic inflation | "a leading reasoning and agent model in its size, with great cost efficiency" | Unverified superlatives ('leading', 'great') assert competitive primacy as fact, pre-empting independent benchmarking and framing the lab's own claim as settled. | Name the specific benchmarks and comparison set, with dates and links, and let third parties characterize the standing. |
epistemic inflation | "pushing the boundaries of intelligence and driving product innovation and scalable business applications" | Stacks grand abstractions ('boundaries of intelligence', 'scalable business applications') that signal ambition while remaining unfalsifiable and unmeasurable. | State concrete near-term capabilities and limitations the platform delivers, and for whom, instead of unbounded mission language. |
nominalised evasion | "driving product innovation and scalable business applications through our large-model AI PaaS platform" | Nominalisations ('product innovation', 'business applications') hide the actors, the affected workers, and the decisions, presenting a smooth corporate process with no agent or cost. | Say who builds and deploys these applications, who is affected, and what trade-offs (labor, energy, data) the platform entails. |
temporal flatness | "Hy3 preview: The First Step in Rebuilding the Hy model" | A clean linear 'first step / rebuilding' arc erases the contingencies, abandoned paths, and external constraints (compute, regulation) that actually shape model development. | Describe the constraints and forks that led to the rebuild, including what was dropped and why, to preserve the contingent history. |
agency diffusion | "real life doesn't come with a rulebook" | An inanimate subject ('real life') stands in for the lab's own design choices about what context the system ingests, diffusing responsibility for those choices onto the world. | State which contexts the team chose to model, which it excluded, and who decided — keeping the lab as the agent. |