epistemic inflation | "This report provides the most comprehensive analysis of AI's trajectory available." | An unverified superlative about its own flagship product borrows the authority of measurement to place the work beyond comparison, discouraging the reader from asking what it omits. | State scope and method concretely: 'This report compiles metrics across N domains from public and partner data; coverage gaps include X and Y.' |
nominalised evasion | "shape the development and responsible deployment of AI" | 'Development' and 'deployment' as nominalisations hide who develops and deploys, and who bears the consequences, letting HAI claim influence without naming the actors it influences or its leverage over them. | Name the actors and the mechanism: 'we advise specific companies and agencies that build and deploy AI, through these named programs and with this degree of influence.' |
agency diffusion | "AI systems must conform to the often-implicit cultural conventions that underlie human interaction." | 'AI systems must conform' makes the system the moral subject and erases the engineers, institutions, and choices that decide which conventions count, diffusing responsibility onto the technology. | Restore the actor: 'we and other builders decide which cultural conventions our systems encode, and we are accountable for those choices.' |
epistemic inflation | "Advancing AI research, education, and policy to improve the human condition." | 'Improve the human condition' is an unfalsifiable, maximal claim of benefit that frames the institute's work as inherently good and pre-empts scrutiny of trade-offs and harms. | Bound the claim: 'we aim to improve specific outcomes (named domains) while monitoring and disclosing the harms and trade-offs our work can produce.' |
temporal flatness | "2019: HAI officially launches ... 2023: HAI leaders ... meet with Pres. Biden to discuss American innovation in AI." | The milestone timeline renders institutional history as a smooth, inevitable ascent, erasing contestation, course-corrections, and the contingencies (funding, controversy, critique) that actually shaped the institute. | Include friction: note debates the institute lost or revised, criticisms received, and decisions that could have gone otherwise. |